Monday, 5 May 2014

Beyond the woods where tui's chirp


Beyond the woods where tui's chirp, A peaceful forest lies.
Bright tropical flowers and tall tough trees scrape the beaming sun.
The sun lies on a aqua-marine sky which swallows the gloomy clouds.

Beyond the woods where tui's chirp,
A murky cave absorbs all the light apart from the fractured shining crystals.

Beyond the wood where tui's chirp,
new exotic creatures play blissfully with the leaves that have plummeted to the ground.

Beyond the woods where tui's chirp.


Tui 10

3 comments:

  1. Wow, what wonderful writing! I think its beautiful :)

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  2. Yes it's beautiful. Lots of exciting words.I can't wait to see what else is conjured up in term two.

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  3. Wow That was awesome,
    I was really amazed at the way you told me about 'Beyond the woods where Tui's chirp'
    From Marley

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