Friday, 6 March 2015

Joe's Poetry: When lightning strikes

When Lightning strikes,

it flashes as electric charges run through
the ground

when lightning strikes
Zeus grows stronger lightning grows hotter

when lightning strikes
grey & rainy skies always follow
eventually Zeus gets tired then
Poseidon takes his place with a storm
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3 comments:

  1. Unknown12 March 2015 at 12:26

    Wow

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  2. Year 3/4 Grey Lynn Scribblers12 March 2015 at 20:34

    I love poetry Joe and your poem is one of my favourites that I've read this year. Keep up the amazing writing!

    Andrea

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  3. Anonymous25 March 2015 at 10:45

    Hi Joe
    I love how you used wow words to make your poem more intresting from
    From Jaime room ten

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